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The rebels were quickly losing ground. The TSPTF had taken control over Swenden, Misuri, and Minnneaplis. Octivian was one of the few survivors of the disaster at Minnneaplis and was fleeing to the closest hotspot on the eastern front. He saw TSPTF bombers in the distance as he neared the trench, and suddenly said "The TSPF i sevil1" Truly, in the view of Octivian, the TSPTF was a dictatorial government. He swore to defend the revolution with his last breath.

As he drew nearer to the trench, the smells of piss and blood and the cries of dying men became stronger. However, everyone was reinvigorated by the presence of their illustrious leader. "Remmemember men, we have to fite Lorgagon! He cannot win! We had to fite4 ppl like Ms! Ms is teh grettest!" The trench erupted in cheers as they remembered that they were fighting a war for someone who didn't want a war being fought.

Oct scanned the gray, armless bodies of his men and realized that he would need better men than those that fled from the Non Aligend Movement. The rebles would not succeed otherwise. As the sun set, the frequency of TSPTF planes overhead decreased. Oct settled into the trench, but he looked up and saw a TSPTF plane writing "END THE ASB" with its contrail. He shouted "THE TSPTF  WILL GOSE OUT OF CONTORL ONE DAY!" at the sky with all his diaphragmly power, but knew that it had no effect.

I know it's not as good as Crim's, but Crim inspired me.