User blog comment:ForsakenPear/Short Story Contest - August '16/@comment-25379338-20160728223418/@comment-27573690-20160802001420

It was interesting but I didn't know the space/robotic element was coming until it happened. I give this kudos just for being set in Indonesia. Indonesia despite being an influental country dosen't have an image in the English language.

If this story has a theme, your theme is about self preservation regardless of morals, netherless your character is saved by the actions of another.

For an introduction I would give this a five out of ten.