User blog comment:PitaKang/FANFIC! :D Muggles vs Wizards!!!!/@comment-4206034-20120822213408

Nay bad, although us Britons don't call our PM as Mr Prime Minister, just Prime Minister or sir (yeah, sir would do better). I like the style but I think you should add more details onto the scenes and make the sentences longer.

Overall, its great stuff. Hope u don't take offense btw! :D