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Thanks. I'm kinda embarassed by it now. But I wouldn't mind reworking it at some point. I just don't have the time...

Quick preview of what I'd change:


 * I'd significantly pull back Charles Malcolm Edwards' accomplishments while in office, and make the geopolitics much more grounded.


 * I'd give more time to the backstory, and actually go into detail about the (much more achievable) changes that could be made to the technology of the timeline starting in the 80s and 90s.

Better maps. These embarass me.

Revamping the Neo-conservative conspiracy and making McCain a more sympathetic character.

No Obama in 2008. McCain is the George H.W. Bush of this timeline. Obama comes in around 2012.

Trump is arrested for tax fraud in 2007.