Talk:United States (From Sea to Shining Sea)

Good potential but could be formated better

If this is the first page of the series,  then you should create a portal page that summaizes the premis and gives navigatable links to other articles. Save the nation profile for a seperate page, that is your page for the actual Socialist America for another page..

The worst thing about your point of divergence to me is its length, kept it short and to the point. Your idea about Trosky influencing the U.S unemployed is a good starting point but can be more conciesly explained in a series of points. Go from- 1.cause, to effect, 2. explanation for why the POD is important and an 3. opening for what your timeline will be look.

For an example of what a good portal page looks lie I reccomend you take a look here and here.

Look, this stuff isnt the most obvious or easy, but its worth doing when sharing your ideas. I know from experience they will get more attenton and you will be taken more seriosuly. No matter the content, the presentation of the page. and the mechanics of the writing is key

Good luck, and do keep writing,

Stepintime (talk) 01:05, July 19, 2017 (UTC)