Talk:Arrival

Any and all comments are welcome. This is my first independent ATL, and despite the obvious... er... Alien Space Bats... I would really appreciate input on how to make it more logical. I don't care what you have to say, whether it's from 'this is awesome' to something unprintable. Well, you know, as long as it helps me make this timeline better. Other than that I hope you enjoy what's written. Fegaxeyl 13:04, June 20, 2010 (UTC)