Talk:Timeline (A Northern Wind)

Biased "Reporting"
I was considering attaching the "ASB - Biased" category to this one. However, I see no use of "ASB" in the formation of this timeline. Through some "charged" language, it seems to be written by a reporter in the Federal States that is quite bitter with the results of the Civil War.

Perhaps you should seek to moderate the tone. Take a step back and try to imagine how any of this might have happened. It looks to me like the very survival of the FSA in TTL is a miracle. How could they NOT have surrendered and been occupied by the United States?

I fail to see the formation of facist governments in the US and the UK based on the civil war and its aftermath. Perhaps you could work this out a bit in the article about the USA. Furthermore, consider butterflies other than just a deminished "Yankee" presense in North America. Overall, the timeline does not look quite plausible to me, but I admit that I may be biased in the other direction. SouthWriter (talk) 22:13, November 11, 2016 (UTC)