Talk:Second American Civil War (From Sea to Shining Sea)

Problematic Section
This text contradicts itself apparantly

''While the United States started with a larger military and population, communists possessed a larger industry and a large amount of supporters in the United States. The Workers' Liberation Army sent its navy to invade New York City, in an attempt to capture the capital. The invasion at first failed, so the fleet began a siege of the city. This forced the United States Army to retreat to New York. As the United States Army and Navy attempted to stop the invasion, its government began to break down. ''

-Is the 'captial' of the Provisonal Government in New York City? This is not made succifentlly clear.

-at first failed? so it eventually succeded?

- why did the government break down in the defense?

Many gaps here

Stepintime (talk) 01:37, April 30, 2018 (UTC)