Talk:Operation Manchurian Freedom (1983: Doomsday)

Some little things to keep in mind: Doomsday is usually spelled with a capital d; in the combatants section, it might be best to put something else other than the military regions, sounds a bit weird (they are from their, but aren't really affiliated with the region anymore); "Soviets" is not used for this USSR- use either USSR, Socialist Union or simply Siberia.

A larger concern is the Primorskaya Territory- It wasn't a part of the USSR again until 2010, no troops are coming from there.

The Chinese left flank retaliated, entering the city along route 301, and engaging the Soviets about thirty feet down the road.- thirty feet seems awfully specific.

Changchun is already to far south for any military action on the part of Siberia. In general, think on a smaller scale, the entire part about securing south Manchuria will have to go. Imperial China needs room to breath after all. :) Vladivostok (talk) 19:56, April 16, 2013 (UTC)