User blog:Bobalugee1940/TFCN

Okay I was wondering if anyone could look at this new TL I made and give suggestions.

@Lordganon: Yes I know you will probably put ASB and start off on some twelve paragraph explination as to why and no matter what I do it will be entirely ASB, so lets just skip all the hoop-lah and just tell me if it is ASB or not.